Thursday, 29 September 2016

Awake Chapter 2 Dirt and Death

Chapter One Abandonment

Inspector Mitch Crosby and Sergeant Sarah Dames were looking over a very peculiar death.  The victim was Fiona Davids, forty six and brunette.  She worked at St. George’s hospital as a receptionist and she was killed at two a.m. in her own bed.  This was all in the report Sergeant Sarah Dames handed to Inspector Mitch Crosby.  It did not take long for Mitch to spot a mistake. “Sarah, you didn’t note down how she died.”
“Yes Mitch, we do not have a cause of death.  There isn’t any sign of blood so she couldn’t have been stabbed and we’ve examined the whole body, no bullet holes either.  We’ve tested her blood, as far as we know she was perfectly healthy when she died and there are no traces of poison.  Also there are no signs of cardiac arrest and we’ve swept her neck, there are no DNA prints or any signs of rope or her being strangled.”
“So, you’re saying she just dropped dead.” Mitch joked.  He was blond and from York.  He was well liked and very funny, but he could be serious when he wanted to be.
“That’s exactly what I’m saying.” Sarah said.  Sarah was a London girl in her thirties who always tried to put a brave face on everything.  She had brunette hair and always carried herself strongly.

“Do you think she just died in her sleep?” Mitch asked.

“No.  Her eyes are open.  Besides I think she is too young to die of old age.  I do think she has been murdered, but I just can't figure out how the killer pulled it off.”

“Ok, so we have a case where there are no obvious signs of death, no witnesses and no evidence.” The policeman summed up.
****
“It was a complete success.” Shadow said, quietly.

Gravity smiled.  “I’m glad about that; I’m getting a little rusty.”

Shadow laughed and went off into the crowd, leaving Gravity and Bliss by the pavement.  While Shadow was begging amongst the crowd, Gravity was thinking of everyone else who could not or refused to help them: countless eye doctors, social services and various hospitals, but then she thought of the few people who did help them.  She thought back to her grandparents.

Soon after me and Shadow had moved out we went to our grandparents, we were always welcome there.  Our grandparents were a lovely pair, much better than our original parents.  We spent a happy four years there; I was about to start nursery, when my grandmother started to come down with Alzheimer’s disease and she went into a care home, we were welcome to stay there, but we knew we would only get in the way.  We thought that maybe our parents had decided to change their minds, so we went back to our old house.  We went back to find a whole different family living there and that our parents moved soon after we had left home.  We went back to the care home and told our grandparents we were leaving, they tried their best to get us to stay, but it never worked.  So we packed what we had left and our grandparents gave us six hundred pounds to start us off.  Then it was onto the streets.  

Shadow came back and sat down next to Gravity.  He managed to collect two pounds twenty one pence, while Gravity begged one pound and seventy nine pence.  Over a period of just one year, the six hundred pounds was spent.  They tried to ration the money, tried not to indulge themselves, buy only what was needed, but the money had slowly dwindled away.

“You know that snotty receptionist, Fiona Davids?” Shadow asked.

“Yeah, what about her?”

“I don’t know, I just have a feeling that I’ve seen her somewhere before.”

Gravity shrugged.  “It’s possible; we could have walked past her in the street or something.”

“I don’t think that’s it.  Oh well it’s getting dark we should find a doorway.”

Gravity shivered.  “It’s so cold, if we were going to run away, why couldn’t it have been to Hawaii.”
Shadow laughed and fell asleep.
****
Name: Nikki Lambert
Age: Thirty two
Hair Colour: Brunette
Eye Colour: Brown
Height: 5’6”
Weight: Fifteen stone
Place of Birth: Burley in Lancashire
Date of Birth: 05/08/78
Job: Ophthalmologist
Place of work: Saint Anne’s hospital.
Time of death: Four p.m.
Place of death: Victim’s house in her kitchen.
Cause of death: Unknown.
****
Mitch read the report.  He sighed, he was new to his job and he liked it.  His department was in charge of homicides and serious crimes. He turned to Sergeant Dames.

“Sarah is there anything that relates this case to the first?” The policewoman shook her head.

“I disagree.  I say that there is a lot that relates these two cases.  Firstly, both of these victims died in their own homes and both of them are women.  That could be a pattern.”

“Sir, first of all that isn’t a lot and I think that the fact that they are both women is just coincidental.” Mitch shrugged and locked the report in a drawer.

Gravity woke up as usual, with cold feet and a numb bum.  There was not a lot of space in the doorway, as she, Shadow and Bliss all had to sleep there.  It still suited their needs.  Her brother rose about fifteen minutes later.  He looked up, by the light it still looked to be early morning, maybe seven or eight, but he suspected that some shops or supermarkets would be open.  “We should go get breakfast.” He suggested to Gravity.  She nodded and Shadow helped her up.  They walked down the road.  Originally they had lived in Ashford in a pokey little cottage.  When they left their grandparents they started begging around their home town, but it was too awkward there were too many people they knew, old friends, old teachers.  Once they even saw their parents, who walked straight past them, without even a second glance.  Occasionally some of their friends would invite them home for the night, but the siblings knew that they could not stay there for long.  They had to make their own way.  This led Shadow to decide that they should move down to London, where the pickings were a bit richer and the crowd was slightly more generous.  Even though a supermarket might have been open, Shadow thought that they were in no state to enter somewhere like that looking like they were.  They would be thrown out immediately.  It had been years since the pair had washed and now the dirt and grime was accumulating.  Occasionally ticks and lice would work their way into their clothes and Bliss’ fur, because of this Shadow thought it would be a lot better if instead they bought some food from the local corner shop.  The pair also had some plastic water bottles, which they refilled whenever they could.  Sometimes they would go into public bathrooms and fill the bottles up with tap water.  This was to save as much money as possible.  Any money saved could buy food, which was always in short supply.  After they had finished eating, they walked around London trying to find a busy area.  It was the same old routine: eat and beg, eat and beg, eat and beg.  Gravity wanted this to change, but the chances of that happening were very slim.

Mitch was reading the Metro newspaper, which he had picked up on his way to work.  He was on page seven, which had been continued from the front page story.  He turned back to the front cover and read the main headline.
ST. GEORGE’S HOSPITAL GONE UP IN SMOKE

At ten thirty a.m. on the fifth of January, St. George’s Hospital was absolutely obliterated in an explosion caused by an unknown source.   Five C4 bombs were let off in various locations across the Occular ward.  The bombs were let off so suddenly and without warning, that so far only one survivor has been reported: hospital Consultant Gideon Jones.   This is his statement on the incident:  “I thought it to be very strange, because only three months ago I was involved in a much less serious bombing at the St. Thomas’ hospital.  You might ask how I managed to survive both explosions unscathed.  When I was a consultant at the St. Thomas’ hospital, I had an office, which had a strengthened steel desk, I don’t know how it got there or why it’s strengthened, but as I heard the first scream, instinct kicked in and I dived under the desk, which took the brunt of the explosion and saved my life.   Maybe both times have been a targeted attack, but I’m not going to let this affect my day to day life.  You might call me mad, but I think that the desk was put there for a reason.   Somebody put it there to save my life.  Perhaps I have a guardian angel.  I knew that I should keep the desk.  When I was transferred to the St. George’s hospital, I took the desk with me and it saved my life again.”

Mitch put the newspaper down and thought.  His only lead, which was the hospital, had been destroyed.  Mitch’s radio crackled into life.
“Inspector Crosby, are you there?” He recognised the voice as his sergeant, Sarah Dames.

“Yes, Sarah I’m here.”

“Mitch, HQ wants us to drop the murder case and try to figure out who caused the explosion at the hospital.”

“What’s to figure out? There’s no elaborate scheme to work out.  Chances are it was a horrific terrorist attack.”

“Would terrorists attack a hospital?”

“It’s a very smart move.  After all it won’t be hard to kill people who are almost dead anyway, but I suppose you’re right.  Who is going to take over the case?”

“It’s been unconfirmed, but HQ wants us at the hospital tomorrow.”

“Ok Sarah, I’ll see you there.”

Mitch sighed and reached into a filing cabinet, before pulling out a form.  Whenever somebody died, there was always plenty of paperwork to fill out and this would keep him busy for the rest of the day.


*Author's notes*

Ok a few things here.  Number one, I would like suggestions for a new chapter name.  "Dirt and Death" was the best I was able to come up with at the time. Secondly yes I got lazy with hospital names.  Thirdly, fourteen year old me took some creative license with police procedure.

Friday, 16 September 2016

Awake Chapter One Abandonment

Fear.  Death.  Pain.  All three of these happen in hospitals.  Some people die in hospitals, some people can get hurt, either emotionally or physically, and some people are afraid to even step inside a hospital.

Gravity was in the waiting room of a hospital with her brother Shadow and her dog Bliss.  The three of them had been to countless hospitals and to countless waiting rooms.  This was one of the worst.  The wallpaper was peeling, the coffee table was starting to rot and the magazines piled on top it, were ten months out of date and starting to accumulate dust.  The lights were constantly flickering as well.  Gravity was hoping to meet a doctor that would not let her down, like all the ones she had seen before.  Her brother Shadow went up to the counter again and left Gravity with her dog Bliss in the waiting area.  The receptionist was dressed in a disgustingly pink floral shirt.  She was chewing her nails and reading a magazine.  As she saw Shadow approach her, she reluctantly laid the magazine down.  "How can I help?" The receptionist asked, in all too patronising voice.

"Hello my name is Shadow and I'm waiting with my completely blind sister."

"What about it?" The receptionist's voice suddenly turned hard.

"You don't understand.  She desperately needs help."

"You'll just have to wait."

"We've been waiting for three hours."

The receptionist shrugged.  "Not my problem." Shadow turned and glanced a look at the receptionist's name badge.  It read 'Fiona Davids.'  Shadow smiled sadly, as he walked back to Gravity, before sitting down.  "No luck." He said to his sister, who was remaining considerably calm.

"We need not worry.  Someone will help." A few minutes later a man in his early sixties with thinning brown hair in a white coat walked past.  Shadow leapt up.  "Excuse me Doctor..."

"I'm actually the consultant of this hospital.  It's Jones, Gideon Jones." The man had a profession and strong manner.

"Please, can you help my sister? She's blind." Shadow gestured to his sister, who was sitting on the old, tatty, coffee stained sofa.  Gideon looked at Shadow and Gravity intently.  Shadow was older, with dirty long brown hair and a certain hardness in his dark brown eyes, that made him look very unwelcoming.  Shadow was in tattered jeans and ragged t-shirt.  He shifted his attention to Gravity.  Her eyes were discoloured, but he could see they were once blue; they were now the colour of ice.  She had shoulder length blonde hair, tied up in a long ponytail.  She wore a long black dress.  He felt sorry for the two children, he knew that the girl could have been very beautiful, but something terrible must have happened that prevented it.  He knew he could not help.  "I am sorry; I must fill out some paperwork on a very important operation." He tried to say this in the politest way possible.

"Oh well, thanks anyway." Shadow stuck his hand out.  Gideon smiled and took it.  Gideon was pleasantly surprised that this young man had decided to shake his hand.  He always thought that young adults were not chivalrous enough.  He also thought that he knew the two siblings from somewhere, but he put it out of his mind and  walked off.  Shadow sat back down, knowing the true meaning of what Gideon had said.  He meant "I don't have time for little kids, go away." The pair waited on the sofa for another hour, during so many nurses and doctors came through with all the same reply.  The receptionist stayed there for the whole hour, giving dirty looks to the two siblings.  "Shadow let's go.  Nobody is going to help us."

"Yes they will, we just have to wait."

"Shadow we've been waiting for four hours." Shadow sighed and helped his twelve year old sister up and gave her Bliss' leash.  Shadow thought back on how this all happened.

I was eight at the time and my mum was giving birth.  She had been carrying and I was really excited to be having a baby sister, but after a few hours the doctors brought terrible news.  Gravity had been born blind, as a result of a premature birth.  I thought that she looked really cute and it didn't matter that she was blind, but my parents didn't share my views.  I don't know why this was.  After Gravity had been cleared to leave, we drove home to our nice little house in Kent, that was close to a gentle stream.  I was asleep, when the car pulled up and parked in the driveway.  I was asleep, when I was carried into bed.  I was asleep, when my parents took my sister out of the house and placed her by the stream near our home, soon before I woke up in the morning.  "Where's the baby? I asked frantically, thinking she had wandered off.

"Gone." My mother replied.

"Gone where?"

"She's by the stream." As soon as I heard this I rushed out and brought her back. 

My mum looked horrified.  "Why did you bring her back?" She asked.

"She's only a baby, she won't survive out there."

"That's why we put her there; we'll get laughed at, if people see us with a blind child."

I stepped back shocked.  "You horrible, disgusting people.  I can't accept this, if you're abandoning her, than you're abandoning me."

"Don't be stupid.  You can't just run away."

I didn't run, not until darkness at least.  In the dead of night I got up and packed all of the things that would have been needed such as money, baby food and a sleeping bag.  Then it was out onto the streets.  I decided to give my sister the nickname of Gravity.  I chose the name Shadow for myself, because if you want to escape everyone then you need to lurk around in the shadows.

Shadow could not believe that all three of them had managed to survive the eight years they had spent on the streets.  Then finally when things seemed to be turning around, they were back in the dirt.  They had spent eight years begging, but what did they have to show for it? A failed trip to the hospital.  This was not what they were looking for.  This is what they had been saving up for, if you can call it saving.  As they were leaving Shadow heard the receptionist laughing her head off.  Shadow stuck his middle finger up at her and mouthed "you'll be first."

*Author's Notes*

This is the first chapter of my first novella Awake.  This was something I started writing when I was fourteen and as a result it's not the best.  I've already received comments criticising the characterisation and general believability.  I have always meant to go back and rewrite this, but not found the time.  So go ahead, tear it to pieces! Don't ask why they're called Shadow and Gravity, that's cleared up later. I know a lot of people are confused by the fact that even though Gravity has been on the streets for 8 years, she's 12.  Don't worry.  I clear this up in later chapters.